The lights go dark,
And all the sounds
Are amplified in my mind.
What was that?
Was that the floor creaking?
I jump as I hear
A car door close,
The sound drifting
through the window.
Then there is that noise again.
Is that someone in the house?
I feel my way to the desk
And find the flashlight
Tucked away in the drawer.
The sound comes closer
And I turn on the light.
What is it?
Whose there?
… no one will ever know
As I lay dying on the floor.
Written for Fandango’s One-Word Challenge (FOWC) – suspense
This was very suspenseful.
Thanks Drew!
Chilling!
Thank you!
A pleasure
Well, you pulled me right in!
That was my evil plan all along… LOL!
It worked!
Yikes! Reading that gave me chills up and down my spine.
Thanks… I tried! 😀
Ooh, that was creepy!
Thanks again!