
The ominous night stretched before me
A black ink sky without a single star
The moon was shuttered by the clouds
A howling wind moved the leafless trees
Each step I took echoed in the near darkness
A lone streetlight dimly glowed
As I approached my car a figure turned the corner
I quickly unlocked my car and got in
I was a bit spooked from the night
The figure continued to approach
He stood in front of my now running car
Just standing there staring at me
I was afraid to take my eyes off of him
I slowly put the car in reverse
He took a step forward
I backed up further and he began to walk
Keeping pace with my car
I was now in the middle of the deserted street
My car stopped and him still staring at me
I reached to the passenger seat to get my phone
The man moved to my left
I made sure my doors were locked
He carried something in his hand
But with the dimly lit street
I could not make it out until
He lifted his hand up with the axe in it
All I could do was scream “Oh, my God!”
… that’s when my alarm went off.
Written for Fandango’s One-Word Challenge (FOWC) – ominous
Oooh! This was fantastic. I was ready for something gruesome
Nothing gruesome this time. Glad you liked it!
It was very good.
Thank you.
You’re welcome
Now that’s one bad dream!
Woke up in the nick of time!
Yes!!
Now that was a vivid nightmare!
I was hoping it came across that way.
I was on the edge of my seat throughout this poem. wondering what would come next, and you told it so well. One of your best, my dear, one of your very best.
Thanks you so much! Glad you liked it!